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Open noise for all to hear
Screaming words
And tears and tears
I feel his hand upon mine
But as I foretaste a gander
A simple pile of dust remains

What Dost ensue present?

A man a man
Of simple being
Sang out to me
In screams and fits
But as I turn to gaze on him
The wind she took with her
The remains of this man.

All twas left within my grasp
Was this mans hand
Within a brief moment soon
His hand was gone too.

She took with her,
All that he was
His soul
His life
His love

And as I walk these halls of fright
I hear the fits’
I have no sight
No sight to see
Of this man I know
But a single flicker of light below
I hear his screams
His tears still
They rain on my soul

Soon..she will take them as well.
©2008-2009 ~shippou39
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Very nice, taylor. Your poetic style is developing right now..just like your drawing was a little while ago. It's becoming more sophisticated. The rhymes are more complicated, but give the illusion of being ever-so-simple (which is a very important aspect in poetry) and I'm very proud of you :)

keep up the good work!

ps:Currently I'm going through an everything block.
Photography, drawing, writing, even organizing thoughts for reports and assignments for school.
It sucks! usually its just one thing my mind blanks out on temporarily.. but this is in general, and its setting in. Hope it wears off soon!
Thank you Kayla. :)
Means a lot.
I have been reading a lot of Byron and Shakespeare latley. The gods of Poetry!

So, they are my inspiration for further development.

and that does suck...i am somewhat going through that just motivation wise with MATH
OMG MATH

i hate it. D :

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I loveth thee for eternity,
for it is all in the truth i know
thou heart is divine
and now that it's mine
i shall never let it depart.
omfg!
I LOVE IT!!!!!

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The pain set me off today
Sorry I ended up this way
Thanks Becca
:)
:)

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I loveth thee for eternity,
for it is all in the truth i know
thou heart is divine
and now that it's mine
i shall never let it depart.
again, you're welcome

--
The pain set me off today
Sorry I ended up this way

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